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PostSubject: Poem War Game   Sun Feb 19, 2012 5:55 pm

First topic message reminder :

The Poem War game
It's a simple game where you reply to the above poster by saying a small poem, it could be any size as long as it's 2 or more lines!
Take this conversation for example
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You must wait until 2 people post then you may post.

For this game you must be smart
The game is just about to start!



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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:07 pm

I'm gonna try to make a topic that's new.
I like bronies, how about you?

I'm a Pegasista, you may have noticed it.
Hasbro is good, you have to admit!



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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:42 pm

nour, i'm glad you changed the subject
reading all the posts really gave the effect
that you don't like it when others show disrespect
to each other so it feels like child neglect
so i'm trying to figure out with all due respect
why most of the peoples rhymes end in a wreck
but i know my ryhmes are past perfect
so i'll make really this clear and direct

that j.j. knows how to ryhme
it's his occupation
so everyone better stop talking bout him like that
before he put's your ryhme's in devastation

p.s-that's all i got. this was a good idea nour


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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:20 pm

Now there's things I aught to teach ya,
in terms of grammar and rhyme,
now first thing's first; let's get a pen
You'll be a pro in less-than no-time

Low-time rhyming all the time's my thing
So damn sweet girls try to give me wedding rings
But a swing and a miss boy is what you just did
But listen well and you can learn some good things

Well a basic is you gotta put rhythm to your words,
if you don't do that, well, you're gonna get served,
So you just sing it in your head and see if it works
Then your lyrics will spread and you're gonna get heard

Now secondly importantly your grammar is ghostly
I don't see how anybody's grammar can't be toasty
Mostly you gotta put some places to apostrophes
before every S ain't working for the words, see

Apostrophes stand for shortened and possessive
Easy go in rhymes 'cause they're so damn repetitive
The tricky bit of rapping is takin' the initiative
Using easy poetry will just make everyone depressive












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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:50 am

Thanks Fish, for the good advice!
That was super duper nice!

But I'll read it later, instead.
Because I have to go, to bed.

So to all of you; Good Night!
I hope you don't have; A Fight!


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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Tue Feb 21, 2012 8:17 am

is this topic still active?
Its more dead then alive :( (doesnt rhyme but thats fine)
People need to start rappin
Instead of watchin vids and f-ppin
And guys please dont ban
Im just trying the best i can
If you dont like the post
I'll edit it for the most

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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Tue Feb 21, 2012 12:36 pm

(if you guys know the different kinds of poetry, you know that it doesn't really have to rhyme, I can make a pro poem without rhyming so don't try so hard to make it rhyme just make it go with the beatz!)

This place is made like a mace.

Right now I can't sit in my place.

You guys fight like your 9-years old. (no offence)

Wait a sec to remember this is really bold.

This game was made to compete others' shit.

Right now I don't need a hit. (book,poem,w/e that can be popular and good ex; kro's book)

If you realized the game was made for war.

Change the topic if you don't want it a battlefield.

Yes I suck, but I have my ups n' downs.

Kro the problem is that you brag and make us frown.

But isn't war made to turn it upside down?

Now my shitty rhyme is lost.

Guess my message's end is here.

(My message is that Poems should be a message, inspiring, creative, it doesn't have to rhyme, depends on what type of poetry your going for, you can use both types or one or neither. But nour you called it Poem ''War'' Game to showoff your battle skills for the readers' field. It should be Poetry/Poem Game.)




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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Tue Feb 21, 2012 5:09 pm

dude this is poem war
non can go alive without a scar

the war causes destruction
all i need is a distraction

to go behind and kill some guys
and end their miserable lies

now lets change that subject
let me grab some random object

how bout age? nothing can change age
anyway right now im feelin like eating a sausage


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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Tue Feb 21, 2012 5:23 pm

I can rename this whenever I want.
I really should, a lot of you taunt.

You should all know that this is only a game.
I think Lupe is right, that I should change the name.

I mean, it's true that a lot of you brag.
Hold on a sec, I got some serious lag..


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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:11 pm

First off Pyro; that's no fun,
I mean sure, rhyming poetry ain't the only one,
but hell; people find things interesting
if they can speak, or rap, or sing

Now Bloo; we've talked about this,
say your words aloud and see if they work,
your first line doesn't work, swing and a miss,
But hold on right there, we'll make somethin' from this

Well ya see, scar doesn't rhyme with war
You say war like you would say door
Scar you say like you would say far
Now, let's change your "scar" to a good old "whore",

Now yay, everybody's got pay
Every poem they make's gonna get them laid,
Now this is where the money's made so
Start checking what you write; you'll go up a grade












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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Tue Feb 21, 2012 11:47 pm

Fish, I know I have a hard time with Rythem
I don't even know if I spelled the word right
But who cares, this really isn't a war
Or so you think; I think that this ryhme is gonna be pretty tight

Now If you haven't seen it yet i'm using a ryhme scheme
It's like how a story set's a mood and has a theme
So far it goes A,B,C,B and then A,A
But if you don't want to read anymore you can go write an essay

On why this topic is for fun
Not for war
I think that Nour meant it
but she can't spell anymore

No offence Nour
And excuse me for mistakes
If we had to be on teams
We'd send Fish right through the gates

Now I Think we should just ryhme for fun
And by the time my rap end's
The day is gonna be done

So why don't you all sit back
And watch in galore
When you see my next rhyme
Is the French and Indian War

(Teams wouldn't be that bad idea. lol. Don't take that into consideration Nour. Rock ON!!!)


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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Wed Feb 22, 2012 12:16 am

Darklight's the name
and i'd love to join this poetry game.

I know i'm new
so some of ya probably don't have a clue

i'm pretty good when it comes to makin a rhyme
and i usually succeed time after time

i've noticed many mistakes
especially in the poems bloo makes

i'm not tryin to diss
i just don't really like the constant rhymin miss

so please to make this poem come to it's ends
I just hope we can all just be friends
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PostSubject: Re: Poem War Game   Wed Feb 22, 2012 4:46 am

I don't think teams are good.
Someone could go inactive 'cause they're busy buying food!

As for you, DarkLight, you're pretty good at this.
Any pals? Any brothers? Have you got a sis'?

So you said you're new, eh?
Well then welcome to W D A!

W D A is World Dueling Academy.
I think that was obvious, that was stupid of me!

I agree, some people suck at rhythm.
But I see things with whole different vision!

My rhymes ain't the best if you know what I mean,
They sorta suck, like you've clearly seen!

But I'm okay with that, this is only a game.
I even don't mind that my poems look the same!

I hope you all have had a good fun day,
And that is all what I wanted to say!


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