First topic message reminder :

The Poem War game
It's a simple game where you reply to the above poster by saying a small poem, it could be any size as long as it's 2 or more lines!
Take this conversation for example

Spoiler:

Taken at Dew's Birthday

Karin wrote:Congrats and happy birthday Dew
You're older than us but you still grew
I hope you're feeling good
That will put us in a good mood!

99nour wrote:I hope you had a great day dew,
A late happy birthday just for you
I hope your 2 Terabytes were good
'Coz now it's time to steal your food!

Slightly worse; Karin wrote:Nour why do u start hating?
Its not fun what you're creating
You should make everyone your friend
Or do you prefer be alone in a band?

99nour wrote:Roses are Beige
Violets are Green
This poem makes no sense
Just stop acting like a queen.

Fish, epic Poem wrote:Woah! You two, stop this madness!
All you'll cause is others' sadness!
The rhymes, the insults, there's no excuse,
Keep this going and I'll put my hammer to use.

99nour wrote:I'm sorry Fish, I really am!
Just lock this topic, while you still can!
It's not Dew's birthday anymore
Would'ja look at that, it's a poem war!

Which was also how the game started!

nour, i'm glad you changed the subject
reading all the posts really gave the effect
that you don't like it when others show disrespect
to each other so it feels like child neglect
so i'm trying to figure out with all due respect
why most of the peoples rhymes end in a wreck
but i know my ryhmes are past perfect
so i'll make really this clear and direct

that j.j. knows how to ryhme
it's his occupation
so everyone better stop talking bout him like that
before he put's your ryhme's in devastation

p.s-that's all i got. this was a good idea nour

Now there's things I aught to teach ya,
in terms of grammar and rhyme,
now first thing's first; let's get a pen
You'll be a pro in less-than no-time

Low-time rhyming all the time's my thing
So damn sweet girls try to give me wedding rings
But a swing and a miss boy is what you just did
But listen well and you can learn some good things

Well a basic is you gotta put rhythm to your words,
if you don't do that, well, you're gonna get served,
So you just sing it in your head and see if it works
Then your lyrics will spread and you're gonna get heard

Now secondly importantly your grammar is ghostly
I don't see how anybody's grammar can't be toasty
Mostly you gotta put some places to apostrophes
before every S ain't working for the words, see

Apostrophes stand for shortened and possessive
Easy go in rhymes 'cause they're so damn repetitive
The tricky bit of rapping is takin' the initiative
Using easy poetry will just make everyone depressive

is this topic still active?
Its more dead then alive :( (doesnt rhyme but thats fine)
People need to start rappin
Instead of watchin vids and f-ppin
And guys please dont ban
Im just trying the best i can
If you dont like the post
I'll edit it for the most

Failed~

(if you guys know the different kinds of poetry, you know that it doesn't really have to rhyme, I can make a pro poem without rhyming so don't try so hard to make it rhyme just make it go with the beatz!)

This place is made like a mace.

Right now I can't sit in my place.

You guys fight like your 9-years old. (no offence)

Wait a sec to remember this is really bold.

This game was made to compete others' shit.

Right now I don't need a hit. (book,poem,w/e that can be popular and good ex; kro's book)

If you realized the game was made for war.

Change the topic if you don't want it a battlefield.

Yes I suck, but I have my ups n' downs.

Kro the problem is that you brag and make us frown.

But isn't war made to turn it upside down?

Now my shitty rhyme is lost.

Guess my message's end is here.

(My message is that Poems should be a message, inspiring, creative, it doesn't have to rhyme, depends on what type of poetry your going for, you can use both types or one or neither. But nour you called it Poem ''War'' Game to showoff your battle skills for the readers' field. It should be Poetry/Poem Game.)

First off Pyro; that's no fun,
I mean sure, rhyming poetry ain't the only one,
but hell; people find things interesting
if they can speak, or rap, or sing

Now Bloo; we've talked about this,
say your words aloud and see if they work,
your first line doesn't work, swing and a miss,
But hold on right there, we'll make somethin' from this

Well ya see, scar doesn't rhyme with war
You say war like you would say door
Scar you say like you would say far
Now, let's change your "scar" to a good old "whore",

Now yay, everybody's got pay
Every poem they make's gonna get them laid,
Now this is where the money's made so
Start checking what you write; you'll go up a grade

Fish, I know I have a hard time with Rythem
I don't even know if I spelled the word right
But who cares, this really isn't a war
Or so you think; I think that this ryhme is gonna be pretty tight

Now If you haven't seen it yet i'm using a ryhme scheme
It's like how a story set's a mood and has a theme
So far it goes A,B,C,B and then A,A
But if you don't want to read anymore you can go write an essay

On why this topic is for fun
Not for war
I think that Nour meant it
but she can't spell anymore

No offence Nour
And excuse me for mistakes
If we had to be on teams
We'd send Fish right through the gates

Now I Think we should just ryhme for fun
And by the time my rap end's
The day is gonna be done

So why don't you all sit back
And watch in galore
When you see my next rhyme
Is the French and Indian War

(Teams wouldn't be that bad idea. lol. Don't take that into consideration Nour. Rock ON!!!)

Darklight's the name
and i'd love to join this poetry game.

I know i'm new
so some of ya probably don't have a clue

i'm pretty good when it comes to makin a rhyme
and i usually succeed time after time

i've noticed many mistakes
especially in the poems bloo makes

i'm not tryin to diss
i just don't really like the constant rhymin miss

so please to make this poem come to it's ends
I just hope we can all just be friends